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PostSubject: 1234567890   Fri Dec 25, 2009 9:47 am

Hmm... Christmas.. though I'd write something.. xP





"Snowflakes; small tiny light visible raining flakes.. that covers the ground. They tide each other up as a blanket and warms the ground from getting air temperatures. I really didn't have anything to do.. sometimes it's not so comforting to live alone.. I was sitting next to window and watching outside, might get you stuck to watch just snowflakes falling on wide area.. as they fell slow and floatingly, it was relaxing.. peaceful..

Little did Chris know when he left the house with slamming doors, that what might lay ahead with minds of frustration. Starting the frozen car and speeding off the driveway, it's of course mind clearing to get far away from others.. and just to be alone.. for a moment.

When wind connects with snowing, it stops being so interesting.. it almost looks as a heavy rain when it's windy and snowflakes are flying almost vertically.. it's too angry weather to be watched, .. You always said to find the most beautiful thing from the most ugly moment, and focus on that.. and with that, you got something good in every bad.

Chris was heading the direction the road took him, didn't really matter where.. when you got a road ahead, you at least have a direction to go, it's the dead end that makes people cross the edge of cliff.. If you can build a bridge over every concern, you are unstoppable except for faith. Mind is one of the enemies, .. enemies of your life.

In all that darkness.. where you only see close by snowflakes flying fast cause of wind.. and sky is filled with clouds.. it's dark.. there isn't really anything beautiful to see.. except.. maybe the further standing streetlight post, .. it creates a small sphere of it's light, you can see the flying snoflakes easier on that lighty background, but it also looks like surrounding sphere, it's an open space for everyone to come, and it looks steady and heartwarming.

Chris was banging hes hands on the steering wheel, when you go thru the just happened argument in your mind.. the other person feels so stupid, .. hitting something helps.. cussing in your mind, pressing your feet little harder to accelerator, to get more speed.. just driving outta there.. the faster the better. The road looks almost blocked by snow, fresh fallen snowfleaks on it.. even the snowploughs' are annoying.. where are they when you need them..?

To try to see the edge of light, of the surrounding sphere.. it's really hard. You really can't tell when the light turns into darkness.. sometimes it's depressing to think, that all there is, is darkness.. and only some light spots creates light, but all the lightspots are consuming material.. I think I'll just focus on the center of the light, not just on the edges of surrounding darkness.. The pole suddenly shakes, the light blows up, the sphere disappears, the distanced snowflakes gets surrounded by darkness.. the whole pole snaps and crashes to the ground, .. everything can happen so quick and so unnoticeably.

When wind throws snowflakes infront of your windscreen, you really don't see anything. The fast speed also doesn't help any, for the least the windscreen whipers. It's thou very familiar road. How many times have Christ drove thru this road..? It's a figure that makes an accident-form to blow sky high. Sudden calculation error.. and backtires are going to the wrong direction.. how fast can you really spin the wheel? How fast you should spin it? When does it overturn? Car will drive itself to ditch, it's only your steering that makes it stay on road. The sudden streetlight post.. Primitive habits.. to fasten your seat belts, after or before you've starten your car.. it's luck in accidents that when you don't really think, you do the things your used to do, even if you're angry.. When car hits hard to something solid, it stops fast.. even if the object snaps or collapses, it still reduces your speed fast. Seat belts hitted on Chris's chest, windscreen got shattered, pieces of wood flied inside the car.. in accident, you don't feel the penetrations of objects that goes thru your body.. some blood dropping inside the cockpit.. the whole vehicle got turned over in ditch while snapped post falled onto it..
Who would be watching? Outside? When it's Christmas night, there's no one really outside.. not a soul. Everyone is inside with their families, that's where Chris should be too. The Christmas is getting more and more crazy with shopping and arrangements.. but in the end.. it's just closeness and warmness.. of heart and body. It only happens once a year. Who would be watching outside..?

My hands shaked.. I opened the driver's door.. even thou the car wasn't too much to be recognized as a vehicle anymore.. at least the driver's door still worked. There was a man inside, he was interwined with seat belts.. he was sitting upside down.. and unconscious.. he was bleeding. I was frightened.. What should I do?
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He was breathing so calmly.. he has this neckprop, and bandages all over hes body.. Nurse was putting something to hes dropping hose, and she said he's going to be fine.
I don't know this man.. Who is he? Where did he come from? Where was he going? I'm holding hes hand.. Do I want him to wakeup? I know he broke my sphere I just created in my mind.. he broke something that was mine.. for some reason, I want to know all about this man.

I hope you are all fine there where you are, I've always been wondering does the days of Christmas different anyhow of all the other days in there? .. Sometimes I still am missing you alot, but somehow it's good that I'm only visiting here once a year.. I've found my peace of life.. I'm now happy.

Merry Christmas, Mom.
- Cecilia"

Cecilia sets the letter on the grave and lights a candle next to it.
She stands up and walks few steps backwards..
After a moment.. she turns around, and Chris takes her under hes hold.
They walk away.. together.
Chris knows, he got given the very best christmas present of all. Life.





Merry Christmas, DamNation
- John
 
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PostSubject: Re: 1234567890   Fri Dec 25, 2009 1:27 pm

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PostSubject: Re: 1234567890   Sat Dec 26, 2009 3:16 am

Are you a writer as profession or what?
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PostSubject: Re: 1234567890   Sat Dec 26, 2009 3:59 am

goin to read this later when having more time Wink

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PostSubject: Re: 1234567890   Sat Dec 26, 2009 7:03 am

lol.. writer as what? Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: 1234567890   Sat Dec 26, 2009 7:14 am

lol,this true?
O.O
merry christmas John...or w/e ur name is Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: 1234567890   Sat Dec 26, 2009 9:21 am

naa-a.. just a story I came up with while I was writing it..
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PostSubject: Re: 1234567890   Sat Dec 26, 2009 9:26 am

lol ur sick Shocked
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PostSubject: Re: 1234567890   Sat Dec 26, 2009 1:35 pm

Very Happy .. y thanks..
Well I though to write some sort of christmas stuff 'n.. ye..
also wanned to say merry christmas too Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: 1234567890   Sat Dec 26, 2009 3:07 pm

yea merry xmas man. Had a great christmas myself with lots of booze, lots of friends, family and a whole lotta laughs!

Hope y'all had a good one too xxxXxxx
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PostSubject: Re: 1234567890   Sat Dec 26, 2009 7:37 pm

my christmas is still on, im still drinking and laughing HAAHHA
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PostSubject: Re: 1234567890   Sun Dec 27, 2009 3:09 am

Very Happy my bday tomoz so ME TOOO!
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PostSubject: Re: 1234567890   Sun Dec 27, 2009 9:39 am

wooot getting 19?
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PostSubject: Re: 1234567890   Sun Dec 27, 2009 9:41 am

ya
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PostSubject: Re: 1234567890   Sun Dec 27, 2009 1:11 pm

19 is ugly its so old :S
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PostSubject: Re: 1234567890   Mon Dec 28, 2009 1:09 am

happy bday panth
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PostSubject: Re: 1234567890   Mon Dec 28, 2009 1:16 am

ye.. althou you coulda made at least like new topic for it.. Razz might have actually meaned more, ? when you like saw the trouble of creating new! .. :O
well.. since you started it here..
HAPPY BIRTHDAY PANTHY!
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PostSubject: Re: 1234567890   Mon Dec 28, 2009 1:18 am

john you can make a story about panthy bd if u wish ;D

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PostSubject: Re: 1234567890   Mon Dec 28, 2009 1:19 am

happy bday panther,have a good one!
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PostSubject: Re: 1234567890   Mon Dec 28, 2009 1:20 am

happy birthday panther.
your gettin grey hair
you wont get hard on anymore!
have fun!

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PostSubject: Re: 1234567890   Mon Dec 28, 2009 1:28 am

haha.. Very Happy yeh I could but.. don't think I have like time for that for now..
writing long needs privacy for 'round 2 hours.. (depending the lenght ofc)
'n.. while I'm living at bros'.. there's like no chance.. 'n when I get back to my house, which is filled with relatives (sis, B-I-L, Av, Viv, Ron) .. the chances reduces way more.. so I'm pretty sure my next peaceful time will idd be @ the 3rd-4th Jan.. Razz
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PostSubject: Re: 1234567890   Mon Dec 28, 2009 2:43 am

happy birthday
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PostSubject: Re: 1234567890   Mon Dec 28, 2009 5:01 am

happy bday fart smeller!
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